The Laws of Cultivation: Qi = MC^2 Novel

What happens when you realise that in a world of pill popping murderhobo young masters, the true... Read more What happens when you realise that in a world of pill popping murderhobo young masters, the true path to cultivation is by making a whole lot of drugs?Let’s find out.…What to expect?— A lot of spirit animals and pokemon references about them!— Grenades! Nukes! EXPLOSIONS!— Life and Death cultivation stuff— Alchemy Drugs— Far too many memes Collapse Portal Fantasy, Isekai, Male Protagonist, Sword And Magic, Reincarnation, Beast Companions There's a lot I like about this after 90 chapters, but the problems made me drop it. Even the things I like are basically all ideas borrowed from Beware Of Chicken, which did them all better anyway and without all the baggage.This author is terrible with commas. For some reason this is a common problem with English originals. It makes the novel kind of painful to read, since there are dozens of comma errors each chapter.Dialogue is weird and unnatural, plus some characters have annoying phrases they constantly use. This is usually done as a very weak substitute for giving characters unique personalities (like someone not using contractions, ending sentences with ~nya, etc.), but the characters are one of the strongest points of the novel, so I just don't get why it's done here. About a third of one character's dialogue consists of either "senior" or "this one," like "This one agrees, senior." Almost every line of their dialogue has one or both. It gets annoying fast, especially since they're in about half the chapters once they're introduced. I ended up skipping entire chapters sometimes because this character's dialogue was so bad. People constantly call each other by their name or something like child/little one/senior when they talk. In the last chapter I read, 90% of the lines from one character were like "Not that way, child" or "Child, come over here." Almost every damn sentence had "child" in it. Literally nobody talks like that. It's awful, and just about every character does it.I dropped this at around chapter 15 of a competition arc. Going by chapter titles, there were still 9 chapters left before it finished. The pacing and story flow had been fairly decent up to that event, but nothing excuses a 24 chapter "run through the forest and find herbs" competition.My other complaints are minor things that probably won't stop anyone from reading. Like I said, there's plenty of good stuff here, but everything I would mention is done better in Beware Of Chicken. Definitely read that one first if you haven't already. If you like Beware Of Chicken and don't mind my issues with this novel, you'll probably like it, too. If you think this is bad, never read Martial Peak. This King right here guarantees you will hate it. This Emperor also hates when people talk in a third-person. Well, if he is The Rock, speaking of oneself in the third person is acceptable.Watching WWE wrestling some 20 years ago was like yesterday to this Grandpa, you'll have to forgive me if I'm a bit dated here. So dissapointed author made him the Chosen One by ch99. The naive mc tag is missing Quite a good novel. My only dislike is that all the novel is in 1st pov. I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. I read about 130 chapters but nothing interesting happens besides the mc being expelled from the sect, not even his strength in practically nothing, meh.I'm not saying it's bad, but there comes a time when it gets boring, at least for me. try Man... It's a good novel.But I read WN to relieve my stresss after long classes, not to accumulate more with artificial cultivation × science theories. So, not my cup of tea They should add slice of life tag a rat, a rat, she's a rat, she eats the plants, she finds the plants, shes the rat. she's da giant rat dat makes all of da rulez,lets see what kind of trouble that she'll get herself into What https://www.y*utube.com/watch?v=jAXioRNYy4s Rats, we're rats the rat is zonked PSYCHO streamer bullies fellow rats After reading the first 30 something ch i can say its actually quite good and also somewhat interresting but for some reason i am bored reading it, probably because it is somewhat slow in these chapters(even if you cant take that as the general pace it seems to involve quite a lot of interactions between chars that dont even have to be dialog but also other things personly not what i like to read) ( and since it doesnt have many ch i drop it already, maybe sometime in the future it will be worth it for me) This novel contains1. Perspective of major characters that interacts with the MC, that helps expand the world and character depth. 2. The MC himself explore the world with decent curiosity/smart as a scientist/researcher giving off the impression that he is an actual transmigrator. 3. The interaction with other characters are not too shallow and have some form personality. 4. Crisis was everted/resolved decently reasonable, without too much plot armourWould recommend giving it a chance