Chapter 1541: Chapter 1541

Chapter 1541: Chapter 497: Hades Coordinates

“The text is excessively long, can be called an epic work, the setting of the Saint Heir is too superficial, overall simple and to the point, the description is not detailed enough, viewing it the narrative scale is grand…”

“Setting aside the flaws, this Bible is full of advantages.”

Wayne finished his commentary, believing the first draft of this Bible wasn’t satisfactory, and requested Michael and Risa to rewrite it.

The key is character setting, the female roles that appear seriously don’t match the prototypes, the formula is singular and stereotyped, deleting any of them doesn’t affect the plot progression, and they’re neither necessary nor have any highlights.

You’re so good at nitpicking, you must be great at eating fish!

Michael felt disdain in his heart, if it weren’t for the fact that the new Bible concerned the glory of the entire Kingdom of Heaven, and would be a guideline for the followers for a long time, he would have already thrown in the towel.

Seeing Michael’s displeased expression, Risa bowed and asked: “Lord Son of the Holy, this subordinate is dull-witted and unable to comprehend your profound realm, could you explain it more simply?”

“Really can’t help you.”

Wayne pushed the glasses on Mona’s face, speaking enigmatically: “Your Bible relies too heavily on reality, which is not a problem, as relying on reality can generate empathy, allowing believers to feel as if they’re in it, receiving enlightenment. However, the Saint Heir’s misdeeds are too numerous, just his side of these beauties is hard to justify, forcibly rounding it off becomes illogical and easily criticised.”

Michael nodded in deep agreement, these past few days he had exhausted his brain to beautify the Saint Heir, lying through his teeth with pleasant words, nearly driving himself to mental split.

Beautifying the Saint Heir is one thing, the key is that the Saint Heir is named Wayne, every time he has to gloss over the other’s misdeeds, he feels uncomfortable all over, might as well go gnash his teeth over the seven deadly sins in Hell!

In Hell, finding amusement in suffering, writing the Bible is purely self-abuse.

“What, is praising me a couple of times really that hard?”

Wayne was unhappy as he looked at Michael: “Then write it truthfully, add the part where the Vice-Regent of the Kingdom of Heaven rebels, let the believers properly appraise and see what kind of person Archangel Michael really is.”

Michael closed his eyes and remained silent, pretending he heard nothing.

Wayne glanced at Michael, confidentially thought of Pride, and to Risa spoke kindly: “I have a suggestion here, the Saint Heir is born human, but his first half of life wasn’t gloriously righteous, or exceedingly gentle justice, before he bears the sins for all living beings and redeems everyone, he must first accomplish self-redemption.”

Risa nodded incessantly, listening to the holy sound, excitement written all over as he took notes.

“Resurrection, a seeming human, not quite a human, God of the Mortal Realm…”

Wayne curled his lips as he included the prophecy of the Saint Heir: “The Saint Heir completes self-rescue, resurrects, his humanity gradually transforms into divinity, he pities all living things suffering, from this moment starts walking the path of redeeming all living things.”

“A series of tribulations and twists come one after another, all are overcome and resolved by the God of the Mortal Realm’s Saint Heir, time and again displaying miracles before all beings…”

“The antagonists, just use Hell’s seven deadly sins, they are the collective sins borne by all of humanity, every person has them, the Saint Heir born as a human is no exception.”

“After the Saint Heir resurrects, he casts the seven deadly sins into Hell, sins manifest as Devils surrounding the Saint Heir, appearing each time to tempt the Saint Heir into crime, causing the Subsidiary Gods to fall to humanity…”

“On the road to redeeming all living things, the Saint Heir constantly battles the seven deadly sins, each time he defeats a Devil, his power grows stronger, finally comprehending the Seven Virtues, thus able to enter Heaven.”

“Can be invincible, but cannot always be invincible, must let people believe, what the Saint Heir can accomplish, they too can accomplish.”

“As for other churches…”

Wayne raised his hand to rub his chin: “Faith isn’t about fighting and killing, faith is worldly wisdom, endorsing one while disparaging another is too controversial, try to avoid such provocative behavior.”

“No wonder you’re Lord Son of the Holy, your wisdom far surpasses subordinates, a little guidance opens a great door for us, leading to a bright path ahead…”

“That’s enough, to stop here.”

Wayne promptly interrupted: “Risa, are there any more questions, if not, I should go and atone for your nonsense.”

After speaking, a long sigh.

Michael, though arrogant, yet Wayne must atone, what reason is this.

Honest people really have it too hard!

“Lord Son of the Holy, regarding the manifestation of miracles, can you offer further guidance?”

“Such simple logic you still need me to teach you, bring out a few sufferers, whether natural calamities or man-made mistakes, the main gist is the Saint Heir arrives, and the Mortal World is peaceful, the Saint Heir arrives, and the Mortal World is saved…”

“Do you understand fairness, why followers believe in us, precisely because there’s too much injustice and suffering in the Mortal World, suffocating emotions have nowhere to vent.”

“I’ll teach you a couple of tricks, write it in the book, painting cakes… blah blah… blind person… blah blah… sinful woman…”

Half an hour later, Wayne left with his secretary, stepping onto his road to redemption.

Gazing at Wayne’s departing back, Risa’s eyes showed longing, he sighed: “I’ve learned more, every word of the Saint Heir is concise and insightful, directly touching upon the core, if I can truly grasp even a fraction, I’ll have no regrets in this life.”

Michael snorted: “Risa, you should take out the Saint Heir’s diary and study it again, I still say, remember to restrain what you excerpt.” New ɴᴏᴠᴇʟ ᴄhapters are published on novel⸺fire.net

July 15th, Wayne completing his path of redemption, in high spirits came to the Dark Saintess Manor.

First he soothed the three little ones, then appeased the artistic young woman, and finally effortlessly captured the High Priest, it really kept him busy.

Just as Wayne imagined, the wings were very dissatisfied with Michael’s arrogance, only the teacher Slyphy praised his genteel demeanor and great cultivation, well deserving the title of Godlike.