Chapter 74: Chapter 74
After almost a year of writing and editing, the rewrite is finally complete!
2 chapters will be posted a week on Mondays and Thursdays until book 1 has been fully posted. The original (which I shall refer to as the 'First Draft') will remain uploaded as its separate volume.
For any newcomers, this story takes place in a universe where humans evolved upon an ocean world.
These humans were landlocked upon their native continent, making their way to the second industrial revolution before discovering other landmasses across the world.
Book 1 covers the journey of the first successful expedition to these foreign lands, which are inhabited by many strange and alien creatures.
For returning readers, I ended up making quite a few changes, as well as completely rewriting the first 120k words or so (with some significant changes to the rest)
The biggest worldbuilding changes are (spoilers for new readers):
The dragons now know about humanity through flotsam that managed to drift across the ocean through the ages. As such, humans are seen a sort of alien cryptid in their culture - ones with abilities to create otherworldly constructs.
The story now also covers the events leading up to the first landfall covered in the original story.
I could post an exhaustive list of changes at the end of this volume, if that's something that people would like to see.
This story of mine was inspired by works like The Martian and Project Hail Mary (By Andy Weir), and the Temeraire series (By Naomi Novik).
VikasRao on Deviantart has also been a great help in providing and inspiring ideas for this story, and their work on speculatively biology (featuring realistic dragons) is insanely detailed.
I wrote this story for several reasons, but mostly in an attempt to cover a more interesting and sensible first contact scenario. I also wanted to create a "magical" world without magic – reality can be stranger and far more interesting than fiction, after all.
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Perihelion: 161,807,881 km
Aphelion: 167,307,471 km
Perihelion: 147,098,074
Aphelion: 152,097,701
0.015% CO2, H2, & trace gasses
0.04% CO2 & trace gases
9.79689745 × 1022 kilograms
7.34767309 × 1022 kilograms
Average Orbital Distance
Redefined using a physical bar of metal.
Plans to be defined as 1650763.73 wavelengths of the orange-red emission line in the electromagnetic spectrum of the krypton-86 atom in a vacuum are in progress.
NOTE: Mass =/= weight
Since gravity is 80% earth gravity, 100 kg on a scale will show 80 kg.
100 kg is still 100 kg on this planet, it just weighs less.
Other units of time are divided the same as Real Time
Like the metric system, this world uses the freezing point of water as 0° while the boiling point is 100°. However, the thicker atmosphere causes the boiling point of water to be a little higher, meaning their 100° is actually our 111.91°C.
The freezing point of water is not significantly affected by the difference in atmospheric pressure.
Boiling Point of water @1 atm = 100°C Googlᴇ search novèlfire.net
(Currently defined by Kelvin, which is defined by the Boltzmann constant)